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When ur so tired of trying
When ur so tired of hurtin
When ur so tired of betrayal
U will wake up and tell ur self it anit real.
When ur so tired of cheating
When ur so tired of beatings
When ur so tired of living
U will wake up and tell ur self it anit real
This life that we live noone is prefect and some people wish that this wasnt real that is was just a interject.
"So many people go threw these thing everyday
And they will get down on one knee and pray
Some will run to the cop for the mistreat to stop
But sometime that dont get help 'til they drop."
So love one another with inch that we have until we leave this land but until then im glad that we are friends.
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Dear Poet Sister JACOBY/MOMMY,
I can feel the pain in this outpouring of poetic emotion and honesty..... It is so well delivered with it's rhythmic timing that it is begging to become a song when it's grown up.....I believe it would be even more profound if were formatted a little differently ~
~ "So many people go through these things everyday
And they will get down on one knee and pray
Some will run to the cop for the mistreat to stop
But sometimes that don't help 'til they drop..."
This entire poem reads so beautifully aloud..... just like a song!!......ALL STARS!!.... well done JACOBY M!!.....and.......WELCOME to COSMO!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo. : )
Thanks for the update and the ideal. I edited and put it the way that u described. In always up to make it better.