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Untying The Knot

Untying The Knot

The ends....
Is where it all begins....
A challenge,
Full of focus and patience
Your willing participant
Equipped with steady hands
Readying to decipher
The intricate loops
Of the tangled mess o love.
Revolving around
A world of complication,
The more the untying I think
Is impossible
The more im branded with a thought;
That the hands of fate have
Weaved these strands to test
My heart.
I've loosen chains
Cleared birds nests from hair
But in my firm due diligence
It can't be helped to take notice
Of the stale smell of doom that lay in air.
With that last lace of bow to undo
Unaware I've only uncomplicated you,
Convoluting myself to the exact opposite
Binding us together forever,
Hitching the secured knots of our entanglement.

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Bradford

Hi Devon love does have a way of tying up the knots but I am going somewhere naughty with that thought . I think love is complicated and does take steady hands and both require patience so both people can understand.  Love does require some untying and letting go . A great write cheers hrl

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Devon La Porte

Thanks Hardrock, I got so tied up with trying to figure out the complicated that I ended up tangled in love. Thanks for the comment im glad you really saw into this one.

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