Poem -

Upon A River...

author
Marion

Upon a river
The sunlight dances
And I remember you
Upon a river
Dancing

Sparkling
With the summer sun
Then running out
Your eyes a'shiver
 
With...
All the winters yet to come
And come they did
Too soon, they come...
The winters

Though...
I choose to remember
Only summer's
Son

M P 27/8/21

 

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Gwendoline

So beautiful and dark also. Refusing to allow the darkness in, trying to remember the brighter times. That's what I felt with this read 💖hugs xoxo 

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author
Marion

Thanks Gwen...hugs X

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author
Being Me

The memories of the summers are always worth clinging on to. I love the word choices in this poem. Words like sunlight and sparkling and dances and a shiver all make the word winter more cold and dark and lonely. Beautiful, clever writing x

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author
Marion

Thanks my friend...for always taking the time xx

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