Vacant Windows

Vacant windows
Fallen leaves
Darkness swallows up the eves
Swollen gutters
Pouring rain
Death is calling
No one gains
Shattered panes
Winds surmounting
His hair is blowing
Dripping, hanging
Barely visible
Though somehow I see this
As I gaze from a far
Could it be him?
No sound comes forth
Though his lips are moving
His hand is reaching
I'm the only one looking
With hallow eyes
He's staring at me
As if he's pleading
For me to save him
Nurses running
Towards his presence
His frail carcass
Turns to face them
I reach out
As a savior
I must help him
Change his destiny
I'm too late
No one can save him
If only he would try
Love could conquer
Asylum windows
Are vacant windows
Of the soul

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Comments
Excellent work well constructed metaphors and word usage
Thank you. As I drove by The Assylum where my dad was hospitalized in 1966, it was night, pouring rain, I imagined him standing in a window, only of course he wasn't there. Thus I had the start to this poem I've been wanting to write for years and within 15 minutes it was finished.
great write congrats x
So touching! It's something I can relate to...