Vacant Windows

Vacant windowsÂ
Fallen leavesÂ
Darkness swallows up the evesÂ
Swollen guttersÂ
Pouring rainÂ
Death is callingÂ
No one gainsÂ
Shattered panesÂ
Winds surmountingÂ
His hair is blowingÂ
Dripping, hangingÂ
Barely visibleÂ
Though somehow I see thisÂ
As I gaze from a farÂ
Could it be him?Â
No sound comes forthÂ
Though his lips are movingÂ
His hand is reachingÂ
I'm the only one lookingÂ
With hallow eyesÂ
He's staring at meÂ
As if he's pleadingÂ
For me to save himÂ
Nurses runningÂ
Towards his presenceÂ
His frail carcassÂ
Turns to face themÂ
I reach outÂ
As a saviorÂ
I must help himÂ
Change his destinyÂ
I'm too lateÂ
No one can save himÂ
If only he would tryÂ
Love could conquerÂ
Asylum windowsÂ
Are vacant windowsÂ
Of the soulÂ

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Comments
Excellent work well constructed metaphors and word usage
Thank you. As I drove by The Assylum where my dad was hospitalized in 1966, it was night, pouring rain, I imagined him standing in a window, only of course he wasn't there. Thus I had the start to this poem I've been wanting to write for years and within 15 minutes it was finished.Â
great write congrats x
So touching! It's something I can relate to...