Poem -
VAL & TONY TAYLOR'S 3 WORD CHALLENGE!!
CHALLENGE: Write a poem using three words chosen by someone else.
Example: These are the words I was given:
-Ocean
-Calm
-Trees
The restless calmness
Settles as the air
Moves through the leaves
Disconnecting from the trees above
In unison they drift apart
Until they reach their final destination
Of the oceanic waves
- Valerie Lynn
HERE ARE THREE WORDS FOR TONY:
-Insanity
-Pistol
-Treasure
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Hey Val I agree with cherie. I could not write a poem in 5 mins . I write freestyle which is fast but it takes at least 40 mins to a hour on a write for me . Hugs rock
Take all the time you need...Tony is up next and I know you both will be able to write a poem using just three words that someone randomly gives you. ;)
You're great Val.......
You're not going to believe this but I just wrote one and it vanished
So here goes again
THE PIRATES PLEASURE
The princess boarded the ship
A pistol hidden beneath her slip
She questioned the Captain with this,
"Where shall I sleep, and may I
See this famous treasure?"
The captain lead her downstairs
Where, when he turned his head
She shot him dead
Is this insanity? she thought
But, quickly she fought
Her way off the ship
Into an awaiting old saying,
Never under estimate a woman
When revenge
For the life of her brother
And a true pirates treasure
Were on the mind
Of her family
And
The Old Pirate's Pleasure!!
Tony Taylor........I think that was 6 minutes!!
Hey t 6 mins really . Wow . I write freestyle and I am impressed. Very cool bro .rovk
Thanx ROCK!!!.........I lost the first one.........but hey I love a good challenge........on my way to check out yours now!!...........T xo
There really doesn't have to be a time limit but six minutes...wow!! I knew you could do it and it came out sooo amazing!! Your talent amazes me. Are you going to pick anyone else? Not sure who else is willing to play!
Val ♥
O.K. ~ next three words ~ for the next to rise to this occasion of FUN!!
1. Orchids
2. Owl
3. Midnight
Have fun with this.........smiles.......
Orchids in bloom
Under the cover of this dark and Dreary night
The owl talks amist the pale moonlight
With orchids blooming throughout the land
Midnight is slowing approaching as the evil takes command
Thanx ROCK!!!.........I lost the first one.........but hey I love a good challenge........on my way to check out yours now!!...........T xo
At the stroke of midnight...
Under the moon so big, bright, and full...
The owl sings her song...
The other animals awake to her sound from a peaceful sleep...
The orchids bloom with the rise of the sun...
As the soft breeze blows...
The fragrance awakens the soul...
I gave it a try...
That was fun...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Now Sparrowsong and HRL you choose three words for someone else! :) Very unique and intriguing poems!! Thank you for participating! It's so awesome to see the fun and talent!
Val ♥
FEATHERS!!!......Very cool sweet poetess........well done my friend.........enjoyed..........T xo
My three words for the next person are...
-Class
-Flamingo
-Beach
Have fun!
Next?
Hugs and Smiles!
sparrowsong
My three word challenge I give to Richard Waters...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Hello Flower Girl...
Thank you very much!
Oohh La La!
You pick 3...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
The flamingo stands,a class apart, as if to preach
The colour of setting sun over a Caribbean beach ! :)
Hugs !!! :)
You Rock Richard!!!!........that was excellent!!..........T xo
Hello Richard...
Thank you very much!
Awsome!
Hugs! :)
sparrowsong
Under the big Sky...
Billions of stars dancing to the rythm...
The Angels singing Hymns in Heaven above...
Hugs! :)
sparrowsong
Richard still needs to pick three...
Oops!
Are we allowed to play twice?
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Of course!! I just tried it using Richard's words...not as easy as it seems!! ;) At least not for me haha
Val ♥
Hello Tony...
Thank you very much!
Hugz! :)
Feathers
I DON'T KNOW IF THIS WILL WORK BUT THESE ARE THE WORDS RICHARD CHOSE: I DID THIS IN TWO MINUTES...PLEASE DON'T JUDGE HA ;)
She was the shy type
The kind that no one liked
Until they got to know her and understood her way of life
She appeared shallow
Yet deep down she cried herself to sleep each night
Realizing no one else knew
She was desperate for a new life
One that no one else could provide
Her unearthly character and mysterious manner
Always had her playing a different character
-Valerie Lynn
Absolutely incredible Val !!!
Love and hugs !!!
Aww thank you Richard!! I tried!! :)
Val ♥
Hello Sis Val...
Amazing!
WOW!
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Thank you Sparrowsong...I added three more random words...hoping someone can write about this craziness! ;) Love ya!
Val ♥
Scratching my head in awe...
This Lust is so mesmerizing...
I find myself in a crazy hypnotic state that I never want to escape...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Wow that is soooo amazing!! Thank you love! You're writing is awesome!!
Val ♥
Your* writing...
Thank you very much Sis Val...
My 3 words
-Together
-Close
-Game
We played the game
With given names
Now that the end draws close
Die together lover forever, so death we chose.p
Definitely a challenge Sparrowsong, good choice words.
Under the black veil...
Feeling as though the place you're in is very dark...
Laid to rest the love who has been your life...
Tears continue to fall under the black veil...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Brilliant...made me tear up. Wowwww!! Love ya Sparrowsong!
Val ♥
lol, love this rVal, and here is my contribution for the words
1. Orchids
2. Owl
3. Midnight
I believe it was Tonys'
Orchids...
I remember the night I saw you
sitting by the moonlit sea
orchids sleeping all around
moving in the cool summer wind
your lone silhouette, stirring me
your thoughts seem so deep;
lost in contemplation
gazing into darkness
and I had to smile at the ghost owl
it was troubled by my presence
but midnight screamed your scent
and it seem like predestination
that we should meet like this
If I could choose 3 words they would be
Magic
Music
Money
Cheers, Val...that was a fun exercise, great idea
Aw thanks! That poem was deep!! Goodness you just want to make me write even more as a personal challenge to see if it's even possible! Love it Chris! :)
Val ♥
Awesome Mamma Jamma!!.........you got it!!.........and you've got it in Spades brother!!........not too many that could do this so quickly...........but look ~ I forgot who I was talking too..........Miss you brother......."..but midnight screamed your scent...".........well done C!!............Love and Rockets!!........T xo
Hello Sis Val...
Love ya too Val!
Thank you very much!
Within the shallow water...
Unearthly awareness surrounds her imagination...
She looked around and everything seemed unfamiliar...
She didn't know what brought her there...
In her desperate state of mind...
Reaching for what once was real...
Never stepping back into the shallow water...
This was based on Richard's three words...
Hugs... :)
sparrowsong
Great work Sparrowsong !
Hug ! :)
Hello Barry...
Awesome!
Very creative!
Hugs...
sparrowsong
I will take 3 !!!
let her rip
Mark I'll give you three then you give me three so we don't feel left out lol.
Animals
Universe
Flying.
Aww I don't want you guys to feel left out!! We started this probably a little too early before people were able to get online but I am so happy you both joined in! Sorry I passed out earlier than expected last night. Much Love to You Devon and Mark!!
Val ♥
I still had fun
I missed all the fun. Anyway this was really a cool idea and a great skill builder Val and Tony.
QUESTION OF IT ALL
Animals on this rock before us.
Universe before them
Flying atoms before that
How it all started is:
something that is difficult or impossible
to understand or explain.
Nice Mark I forsaw that type of theme to arise. Well done.
devon here you go;
power
infinity
logic
Immortality impossible thought logic minds,
They've yet to reach towards infinity stars
That greater power beyond heaven's universe
Holding the keys to all existence.
That was a tough one Mark thanks for the challenge I enjoyed that.
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