Poem -
Value
I see the good in you
Cause i see the wrong in myself
Do you see the wrong in you?
Cause then you'll see the good in my as well
We seem to be obscure about are selfs
Pick a flaw out in me
Then pick two out of your self
Some How it all seems to equal up
But we still don't care about others feelings
Just are selfs
This is where selfish comes in & thats apart of hell
Because were suppose to value each other
So we can value are selfs.
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very nice poem... I really felt this.
Thanks :)
Greetings Molly,
As stated Morris, this is a very nice poem, reasons for rational and degree in seperation of our flaws understandable and in most cases warranted, yet, we all have flaws and our attempts to narrow them down too (0) against one another, just as my partner, (Morris) preaches, so loyally and continuously,to bring to an end. Our primary goal and sounds as though, Molly feels the fire and fortitude, to voice her valued opinion as well, on the differences we all need to make, for one another, thinking of others for a change rather than focusing on what i can do for myself......Good Job...
Take Care,
Jim
Just observed, comgratulations on your nomination...pretty fast nominate,(Wow).
Jim
Very Strong poem. I enjoyed reading it
Thanks everyone !