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Versal Law

Versal Law

You whisper soft
and 
Your words
become lessons ...
You write words
and
They become law …

As we make love
our
Bodies merge
as one 
With heaven
tis a perfectly 
Natural versal law …
 

 

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Gwendoline

Hello Neville :) 
What can I say, this is divine. A short yet attentive, perfectly worded poem. It oozes that loving tenderness felt when real love captivates the heart. I so enjoyed the use of the word "versal" Those ornate capital letters that bring a special touch to ones verse. Real Love is indeed a special delicacy. Such a lovely read my friend

Many thanks 
Gwen x

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Neville

Hello Gwen, I can't thank you enough for the glowing and consequently heartwarming words you have bestowed upon my little scribble here today .. For a while, I thought I had been forsaken having posted a couple that seem to have passed well under the radar .. 

I so hope your world is being kind to you my friend & wish you all the very best of All Good Things

Your literary friend .. Me :)

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Gwendoline

Oh Neville I will go root those no doubt wonderful works out. I am normally a lot more active than I have been recently. But I promise I am getting back into the swing so to speak. I will be having a look at past poems and doing some catching up. Your work included, as I am a fan :)
Keep writing my friend, for it would be a sad day if you stopped

Your poetic friend and fan 
Gwen x

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Neville

Ha .. bless you Gwen n truly .. not to worry at all .. I am only too glad to have somewhere to paste my little scribbles .. x

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Tony Taylor

Hey NEVILLE!!......a VERY engrossing and elegantly delivered piece of poetic charm and romanticism.......Even in its succinctness it packs a lot of powerful and tender imagery that lingers in the minds eye and evokes such warm feelings for the reader!!.......ALL STARS & PINNED!!......Bravo dear poet brother!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo  : )

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Neville

thank you kindly my friend all my stars now feel quite remarkably aligned ... brevitas succinctus sir ....... and upwards of course :)

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Being Me

Well this is just so romantic! 

You whisper soft
and 
Your words
become lessons ...

I just love how this starts. Really romantic and lovely to read x

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Neville

You just made me smile BIG so ya did .. Thank you BM and truly :) x

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