Poem -
Versal Law
Versal Law
You whisper soft
andÂ
Your words
become lessons ...
You write words
and
They become law …
As we make love
our
Bodies merge
as oneÂ
With heaven
tis a perfectlyÂ
Natural versal law …
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Hello Neville :)Â
What can I say, this is divine. A short yet attentive, perfectly worded poem. It oozes that loving tenderness felt when real love captivates the heart. I so enjoyed the use of the word "versal" Those ornate capital letters that bring a special touch to ones verse. Real Love is indeed a special delicacy. Such a lovely read my friend
Many thanksÂ
Gwen x
Hello Gwen, I can't thank you enough for the glowing and consequently heartwarming words you have bestowed upon my little scribble here today .. For a while, I thought I had been forsaken having posted a couple that seem to have passed well under the radar ..Â
I so hope your world is being kind to you my friend & wish you all the very best of All Good Things
Your literary friend .. Me :)
Oh Neville I will go root those no doubt wonderful works out. I am normally a lot more active than I have been recently. But I promise I am getting back into the swing so to speak. I will be having a look at past poems and doing some catching up. Your work included, as I am a fan :)
Keep writing my friend, for it would be a sad day if you stopped
Your poetic friend and fanÂ
Gwen x
Ha .. bless you Gwen n truly .. not to worry at all .. I am only too glad to have somewhere to paste my little scribbles .. x
Hey NEVILLE!!......a VERY engrossing and elegantly delivered piece of poetic charm and romanticism.......Even in its succinctness it packs a lot of powerful and tender imagery that lingers in the minds eye and evokes such warm feelings for the reader!!.......ALL STARS & PINNED!!......Bravo dear poet brother!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo : )
thank you kindly my friend all my stars now feel quite remarkably aligned ... brevitas succinctus sir ....... and upwards of course :)
Well this is just so romantic!Â
I just love how this starts. Really romantic and lovely to read x
You just made me smile BIG so ya did .. Thank you BM and truly :) x
You are very welcome x