Poem -

victory upon heart´s

At last it has happened

my heart is finely free,

to me you say these word´s

at last you say you love me ,

Did i do something that was good?

that made you change your mind ,

and now i am holding your hand

is this love that we have found,

Sweet laughter fills the air 

as the wheel of love move´s  in motion,

a singal kiss cast away my fear

o what a wonderful solution,

I wish this love for everyone 

the feeling of victory,

go out and find your life

and you will smile like me ,

Promises i will keep

and what is mine is your´s,

i am with you until my dying day

all the way to heaven´s door.

writen by

paul o carroll  

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Jason Lee

Paul i feel you, another cracking heartfelt write pal :)

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Paul Carroll

thanks jason i was just going to write to you on your poem that you wrote obsession , man how do you think that one out , this is just wonderful , everything about this one is fab  well done,  super stuff jason i love reading what you write ,  ,,

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