Poem - 22 July 2017, 18:03 Volcanic Susan O'Reilly The unsaid grievances imploded the camels back was broken I exploded Like 3 Pin it 0 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 404 Rating: Total votes: 2 Tags: Anger Poetry Genre: Drama Lyric Topic: Passion Listed in: Contest Entries 5 comments
Dmitri Rudder22 July 2017, 19:56 I like it! Life summed up in three Lines!!! Simple and To The point. It all boils to a breaking point and then.. BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!! -Dmitri R. Reply
Kimmy Alan25 July 2017, 11:02 Many times the best poems are the shortest. This is such an example. Reply
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I like it! Life summed up in three Lines!!!
Simple and To The point.
It all boils to a breaking point and then..
BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!
-Dmitri R.
thanks glad you liked it x
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Many times the best poems are the shortest. This is such an example.
thanks very much Kimmy glad you like it