Poem -
VORTEX
She is back as a whirlwind
treading in avarice and lust,
sucking her energy within
doubts snag her
they are all her dreams
sparkling voices and images.
life devoured into ashes
last arrow didn't miss its mark
trees flower and wither
all gulps into the vortex
nothing gets out!!!
she stretches her hand
out of the vortex
to an empty edge,
but no one is there
and she is all alone.
all her strengths
have been vacuumed
into the unknown!!
LEAH CABAEL YODICO
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Hey Sister Poet LEAH!!..... some of the phrasing here is truly magical .....bringing into the light the cyclical "Circle Of Life" approach to understanding man's existence in the now and the hereafter.....ENERGY is immortal ~ we know that because of physics..... and this is a poetic parallel to that understanding!!......ALL STARS!!..... well done..... LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T xo ?☀✴✳
Thanks brother poet Tony ### life and death occurs every second # the happiness and joy of life ## somewhere out there, a new life is born, while somewhere around you, someone is dying ## Thanks for your support ##
hugs and love
LEAH
Hello Leah...
Some are aware of portals to enter in...
Some have the power and ability to open and close...
When you enter this vortex nothing gets out...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Thank you so much Sparrowsong!! You sum it up concisely ##
hugs
Leah
My Dear Leah,
This whirling wind consumes her
A victim of circumstance
When the Vortex came a calling
She did not stand a chance
She was sucked into it's center
It devoured her so whole
Now she's lost to us forever
Another Angel the Vortex stole
Hugs, Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
My dear Larry,
My Dear Leah,
These beautiful words
Are the most perfect ending
To your ode "Vortex"
Hugs, Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
My dear Larry,
two heads are better than one!!!!
A perfect ending indeed!!
Hugs, peace and love
Hi Leah...I love the phrasing in this write...original...This piece is stunning...Well done!
Hi Rose, thank you so much!!!
Hi Leah, I thoroughly enjoyed this one, going into complete Oblivion and coming out into the unknown, give me hope for a new future
love
Lorna
Xx
Thank you Lorna, sorry for the late response.
Love
Leah