Waiting
I watched him sit silently
Under the moonÂ
No breeze for the blossomsÂ
No wind chimes for June
The muted green landscape
Was still wet with rain
When five singing angels
Quarreled with the domain
âOh valley of silence,
Your operaâs been mist.
Wonât you let us unchain you,
From the fountain youâve kissed?â
I watched him hum loudly
Eyes closed, in the sun
Through the breeze, blossomâs whispered,
âOur life has begun.â
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Comments
Hey MICHELLE!!.....a gorgeous narrative..... that comes trippingly off of the tongue when read aloud...... perfect metering making the flow a lotic pleasure to the ear...... great word choices creating beautiful phrasing.......ALL STARS!!...... all around LOVELY dear poet sister!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T xo ?ââ´âł
Thanks Tony! I am glad you enjoyed reading it aloud. Thanks for being so responsive on here. You're recognition is motivating.
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