Poem -
WALK
We went on a walk yesterday
We all sang a song
We were walking on top of the mountain
My footsteps were very long
We saw a cute little dog
There were no trees
We saw a big eagle
There was a cool breeze
We were so cold
We were all happy
We all felt hungry
But we never felt thirsty
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Comments
Good scribble kid!
Thank you Kimmy Alan for your comment
Hi Sam,
I can see you were thirsting for the majesty of Mother Nature, and she satiated your need with her bountiful beauties. Twelve short lines that say a lot. Welcome to Cosmo, Brother Poet!
Peace and Love,
xox Larry
Thanks Larry Ran
xox
Very cool happiness theme Sam,
i enjoy your down to earth poem
which is inclusive of animals and
nature.
Thank you for your great poem!
best wishes from Jai:)
Thanks so much Jai
XOX
I agree with Jai, Sam, your language falls in line with the theme, very courageous of you to pull your pen away and not compromise the vision, well done, the reader felt the tone and embraced the intent, a solid gold write, my friend, have good day
Dear Christopher
Thank you so much for all your encouragement. This being my first poem which is publically presented, the encouragement is awesome.