Poem -
My Little Experiment
There is a hole in your heart
I put it there
I am not sorry but I must admit
You were only an experiment
For my own pleasure
You were just my little secret
All I wanted was to see
If you still had feelings for me
You were just a personal goal
For me to master control
So with a smirk
I said three words
Expecting you to run away
Instead you kissed my head
Whispering you felt the same way
Well I do not want you back
You ruined me once before
Please turn and walk away
Before I beg you for more
© 2014 Valerie Lynn
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Poetess Valerie Lynn
A Poem from a real life, dear Poetess Valerie Lynn, My applause to you, My Vote for you, My recommendations, We all are for you, with all the support for you to be happy as before. Thanks for sharing this verse.
" So with a smirk
I said three words
Expecting you to run away
Instead you kissed my head
Whispering you felt the same way "
An amazing verse, Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
AWW WILLIAMSJI! I am so excited that you liked it! I am so delirious right now due to lack of sleep once again :( and I wrote it in like five minutes and just put it up on my page because if I didn't I would be thinking all night about wanting to write. Thank you so much for your awesome comment! I am on my way to bed to try and sleep but I will be back to writing more tomorrow! I hope you have a wonderful night! God Bless!
Valerie Lynn,
Take your own time to scribble your experimental verses of your own life, Good. This writings will help you to relieve from your inner pain. Of course, you have to abide with your routine medical treatments as well. Usually an author gets inspired more to write while he or she undergo difficult and dreadful situations in life. Keep your mind on prayers and relax in good mood. Get into more sleep as per doctor's advise, Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Magic of your words with genuine feelings an innocent heart is well enough to shake every stony frame.
We are always with you. Wish you a healthy life.
Ravindra Kumar
Ravindra - Thank you so much for reading and for leaving such a sweet message. Thank you for the wish of good health! I loved it!
Val ♥️
We tend to push away what hurts us, but sometimes the feelings overrule the smart answer. We act like we won't go back, but we do...when we think no one is watching! Good job, The Shaker
Anthony - I know right! This has happened to me too many times then I would like to admit. Always going back to the one who ended up hurting me in the end. All I can say now is lesson learned! Thank you for reading! Always appreciate your insight! Much Love!
Val ♥️
Valerie Lynn,
Congrats on your winning nomination
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
THANK YOU WILLIAMSJI!!!
Much Love! ♥️
been there great write valerie congrats x
Susan - Thank you for your comment sweetie! I can definitely relate!
Much Love!
Val ♥️
This sound like a drama keep putting soul in your material.
TALK ABOUT THE LATE BARRY WHITE SINGER HE WROTE;
NEVER GONNA GIVE YOU UP!
YOUR POEM TOUCHES THIS SONG YOU GOT SOME THING .
ALL I CAN SAY IS WRITE ON
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Anthony - Thank you for reading! Your comment just made me smile! Haha I loved it! Thank you for the support!
Val ♥️
Right from your heart..Very beautifully written..;) Love your writings sweetheart..!
I was not there for quiet a long time..was busy with work..Will do read your stuff soon..:)
Love
Surabhi
Hi Surabhi,
Thank you so much for taking time to read this one! I know people can get super busy so no worries! I was also gone for about two weeks due to a relapse with my illness so I completely understand. I also want to catch up on reading more of your writings! Much Love!
Love Always,
Val ♥️
you mad scientist...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hahaha! 0:)
Val ♥️