Poem -
WALK ON
Always tiny enoughÂ
Just to catch in the throat
Never tear it or rip it
Don't choke
DON'T CHOKE
Sharp enough always
To stick in the lungs
Labouring breath
On the way
NICE DEEP BREATHS
Tacs then not nails
On the pathways and trails
Ever condemned
To walk on
WALK ON
Plenty of tearsÂ
So we never run dry
Fall to our knees
Just to cry
CRY CRY
Struggle for meaning
That exists not at all
Get up keep moving
Stand tall
DONT FALL
Lessons are unlearned
With fear and pain
Little to show
Nothing gained
NOTHING GAINED
All to be reclaimed
By darkening skies
Hearts fail to beat
Then we die
DIE DIE.
Marion Price (2020)
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This poem really reaches out .. it feels like it comes directly ..from some ghostly subconcious realm .and the ending i find to be like perfect in every way ..absl awesomeÂ
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Like we are being controlled by some greater force that wants us to suffer?? We probably are and we definately do...lol. thankyou so much Edward, appreciated my friend ?
Perfect emotions expressed
Hi Greg...life certainly feels this way a lot of the time!! Thankyou ?
Bloody Brilliant again!!! Christ u getting good!!! ❤️❤️❤️Pinned hinny xxx
Thankyou my friend. It was easy to write as I often feel this way...lol..?
Awwww well Its Brilliant!!!
Tell u summit luv thisun is excellent & could well be a winner, in my eyes It already is ???
IV never won on here, never likely too but to be a winner in your eyes Jill..that means more to me. Hugs ?
Well haha I’ve never won either so that’s two of us pml don’t think judges like me or my piems ????
Its not that its because they can't find them under the ones you post on top....I'm still looking for the challenge one lol ?
Poems lolÂ
Interjectory Note:Â
I've never won either kids, but I once received a 'Wow, that stinks!' from the Cosmo Heirarchy, so I'm encouraged.Â
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Pml@kids I bloody wish pardon me French ???
Sorry, no parlez vous France'. Oui esta lechuga grande?Â
Palabra!Â
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Haha xxx???