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We all feel
We all feel like the days get weaker. We all feel like nothing makes since. Death or living, soul or soulless. Remember to us we are just the followers of someone who loves us. Faith is all it takes in him. Sometimes we lose are way and we would like too blame someone else other than ourselves for the mistakes. Mistakes happen in skyscrapers. We feel like skyscrapers are what breaks us which it can if we don't help heal each other. If you believe that you can't feel you can it's true. It's darkness in us sometimes that makes us fall and wanna fail keep trying remember it's us with the hope.
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Amen to that CRYSTAL!!......We ALL have the light of positivity within us.....we simply have to choose to allow that light to shine....you called it 'Most Appropriately' FAITH!! ~
~ "Faith is all it takes in Him..."
~ "Remember it's us with the hope."
A truly powerful write here dear poet sister!! One thing, I think that this piece would be even more powerful if you broke your lines differently, thereby making your overall formatting that much stronger!!.....Just a suggestion (please don't take this the wrong way) my intentions are ONLY to help!!......regardless.......ALL STARS!!.......a fine piece of poetic prose!!........you can't go wrong when God is in the game ?.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?✴❤
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I have missed this site and the true talent that lives here yours included. Loved this piece well done.
Thank you been doing it for 5 years