Poem -
We are lost
We are lost
We let cofusion interfereย
In the art of communicationย
We are alone
We are a slave to banks, the top ranks
The repossession of our homes
But we see true
Seeing only the lightest shade
In the darkest hue
For we are optimists
In a world of pessimistsย
The sky always blue
But we're not stupidย
The truth rings trueย
There's no pulling wool over the eyes...
Of me and you.
Do you see clearly?
Do you see at all?
We're merely elementsย
Spinning aroundย
A firey ball
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Comments
another outstanding write Syd
Thanks again Lisa, I'm glad you enjoyed this one.
- Sydย
So true and beautifully expressed xx
Thank you so much Marion, much appreciated.
- Syd xoย
My Dear Syd,
Many have been blinded
By the Sun's most overpowering light
They have lost all their perspective
Of accepting what is right
.
They are living in a fantasy
Pretending that all is good
Some day, they'll have a rude awakening
And see things as they should
Peace and Love,
Larry xxx
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Hi Larry, your comment is way better than my poem. Expertly crafted. My apologies for the late reply, I've had a lot on my plate recently.
Peace and loveย - Syd xxxย
My Dear Friend Syd,
My words could never be better than yours, for you created the original idea, which was the craft I rode on, to create mine.
Please keep inspiring me.
Love,
Larry xxx
Great piece.
T
Thank you T.
- Sydย
wow!! I really loved this! I feel like I could totally relate. well done!!
Thank you Ella, much appreciated.
- Sydย