Poem -
Pristine and Crystal
I pray this year that,
Winter might be kinder to the
snow
To welcome it in
To let the tiny jewels flood
and flow
Lay softly down and know
They are welcome
Welcome
To come
On the meadow fields
Where summer danced once
In wild and blowsy colours, loved
To come in and lay
Rested on the crevassed depths
The misty peaks and highlands
Undisturbed
Pristine and crystal
Welcome, welcome
Welcome....
M P 5/9/21
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Gosh I am having problems with this site atm... well, its let me in now so — I read this Marion and immediately saw the beautiful images that your words paint. I also sense the metaphorical. A beautiful write dear poetess. Hugs x
Hi love, I'm having problems too having to type in bloody numbers all the time. Anyway thanks so much for persevering Tina cos I love seeing you here. Thoroughly enjoying your book by the way...hugs ❤❤
That's what I have to do! And sometimes it won't let me comment or star or like or vote. And once it said I was a security threat and booted me out 🙉
Anyway...great poem xx
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🤣🤣🤣 NO...I am not!! 🤣🤣🤣 it said a security threat had been detected, I had to type in 3 digits...I did...it then said access denied and then said something about a security issue. And I was out. So I returned a few hours later and all was fine — except for those fucking numbers it keeps asking for. They are doing my head in x
I fucking know..lol...who is going to bomb cosmo for gods sake....well, second thoughts 😂😂🤣🤣🤣
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Awww so beautiful 💕💕💕
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Wonderful poem
Thankyou my lovely friend x
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lovel poem Linda
Thankyou Linda x
This is absolutely splendid.. What a perfectly proper poem precisely penned to bloomin perfection .. and no kidding :) x
Again...thankyou for your kindness Neville x
I may not always be kind, despite my trying to be ... but I am always honest........... x
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Beautifully worded Marion. Rich in imagery that indulges the readers imagination. Also for me a sense of desire to put an end to things. There is no beauty left in this world so come on winter, just get on with it. That's just how I felt when I read it
Gwen ❤
Thankyou love xx
Reads like a soft dream of wishful thinking and gently carries a reader to perhaps a better place.
A clean slate of reborn surrounding's, to start anew.
A yearned for place of inner quietude and all white in its innocence and purity.
And winter by the sounds of it possibly be your favourite season Marion.
Superb writing as always and thank you for sharing.❤️
Aw thanks so much Shaun ...really appreciated my friend x