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WHAT DO I DO?

WHAT DO I DO?

You taught me how to walk...

You taught me how to talk...

You taught me many things like how to tie my shoes...

I watched you get hit and I learned how to cry...

I watched you plead with God to make everything alright...

I watched you live in unanswered prayers that lasted for years...

I learned about patience and faith the day you died...

What do I do when I just need a hug?

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Lorris Morris

Hugs and smiles from me .....enjoyed the read

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Deborah Evans

Hi Sis Sparrowsong Firstly a big cyber  hug from me 
this made me have tears, I cant imagine feelings felt
as a child seeing this happening,
I  can only guess it stays with you for you to write about it
so poignantly 
it is easy to say remember the good times, but them bad times 
happen to people, and minds don`t forget however hard we try 
A sad but heartfelt write 
Love n hugs Debs 
 

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Tony Taylor

I PINNED this FEATHERS!!...... for a simple reason!!..... It's a fantastic write!!....... in every way!!......... you are amazing my friend!!.........HUGZ!!........T xo.  ?

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J A Overton

Hi, great write here. heartfelt and sincere.

cheers jeff

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sparrowsong

Hello Lorris...

That is very kind of you...

Thank you very much! 

Hugs and Smiles! 

sparrowsong 

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Richard Waters

Just an incredible emotive piece which shows sensitivity and understanding.

Lovely work.

HUG !

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Christopher Correia

wow, Sparrowsong so powerful, your communication is pure, simply beautiful poetry....loved this, cheers my friend

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Luke Coomer

Sparrowsong

i am not sure what was actually penned here 

when I read it I could feel the loss of a parent something I've been through more than once when I saw hit I thought of a car crash and not abuse but that's probably because of my experience 

and that's the beauty of poetry I did see this differently then the others but felt it just the same as a tear fell from my eye

amazing write 

LukeCoomer 

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Jai Masters

Sad. Is all ok?  If not I'm coming over! 

 I have my Whitehorse 

 I'm on a stallion to you 

 I'm coming over now 

 To look inside your heart 

luv & silly Jai:)

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Greg Etsell

great poem Sparrowsong big hug from me love you xxoo

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