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WHAT ELSE COULD I DO?

WHAT ELSE COULD I DO?

If you are alive it isn't too late to save your soul...

Maybe, your mind is already made up...

Maybe, you're just not really sure...

Maybe, you can't fathom eternity...

Maybe, you just don't believe at all...

If you die tomorrow and you see your body what would you do?

There's no one to bring you back...

You can see people trying so hard to save you but, it's no use...

There's no heart beat, they can't find a pulse...

You don't hover for very long...

People stand confused do they pray for your soul?

Would it even work?

​​​​​​Maybe, it would be selfish to want to go to Heaven and to want to see you there...

Maybe, I really don't want to lose you forever but, maybe you'll make me...

What else could I do?

Hugs...

sparrowsong

 

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Maryann Petri

I liked this—I was a nurse and can totally relate! Excellent.

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Greg Etsell

SPARROWSONG  I don't fear dieing I  have 3 theories on this frist the old theorie when you die your soul goes to where family is and will always be there number 2 theorie is that when you die your soul goes through a learning
process to lean what you need to know in your new life when you are done leaning you are reborn agin as a nother person and you don't remember your past life and all the people you know in you past life you will meet tham agin in the next life so family friends and people know like you and I you will meet tham agin in nother life as different people theorie number 3 is that when you die your soul goes where ever it goes and still remembers your life and for how long you remember your life I don't know this is new theorie I should have listen to it all but and all that said here I have learnd in the past 40 years by talk to different people on this also reading the bible I think read some where that if you belive in GOD and fellow him that you will have your own space in HEAVEN so if this all true what I have said I don't fear dieing

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sparrowsong

Hello Greg...

Thank you very much for your very sweet comment and support!

Wishing you and your family a Very Safe and a Very Merry Christmas!

Hugs...

Feathers

 

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sparrowsong

Hello Maryann...

Thank you for your service!

 Certain environments definitely can make you pause...

Thank you for your kind comment and support!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

Merry Christmas or which ever Holiday you celebrate!

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sparrowsong

Hello Greg...

I understand about theories but, when it comes to death there's a truth that many of us will find out...

If you ever witness more than one death it becomes more clear...

A camera can capture what the eye cannot...

I'm not afraid of dying either but, just because both of my parents may have loved me in their own way doesn't mean I will see both of them again...

The same Angel didn't come twice when they died, nor did they come from the same place...

I wasn't the only witness either time...

The witness wasn't a Christian either, either time...

Now, they know the Bible more than I do and there's more that not everyone would understand...

I will just leave it at that...

Just know when God wants you to understand you were made so you could...

Merry Christmas!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

 

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