" WHAT IT TAKES TO FEEL ALIVE "
Many live under the thumb of obedience
Even more out of necessity
But so few recognize
The Universal mind
That which helps us to feel alive...
It is indeed, true
That everyone likes to
Have his own way,
But, it is better to listen
And heed Godly advice
For it helps us to feel alive......
Like the laurels with winter, strive
And the crocus burnishes alive
For with adoration, myrtles stay
Like keeping the garden from dismay
Things ~ such as these,
Help us to feel alive...
But alas! It is Godly conversation
That ignites the righteous conflagration
For it is in the speaking on spiritual matters
That brings rapid spiritual advancement
These are but a few of the things
That help us to feel alive....
Tony Taylor. (Chicago)
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Comments
feel alive after reading this!!!!!!!
Thanx MARK!!!....... so glad to hear that!!.......... made me smile brother!!.......... peace..........T xo
Hi Tony.. Great poem I`d like to feel alive like this,
Really enjoyed this. Uplifting.. Hugs Debs xo
Hey DEBS!!........thanx for the ink girlfriend!!.......... glad to hear the "uplifting" in there........ made me smile...........thanx sweet poetess!! .........Love and Rockets!!.........T xo
Your writes are diverse and direct. This incisive, inspiring, intelligent piece really hits the mark in terms of analysing our existence and what it means to be....alive !
Great work.
Warmest wishes to you. :)
Thanx SIR WATERS!!.......... beautiful comment brother......... thank you VERY much!!......... you B da Bomb!!............ smiles..........T xo
Hi Tony, great write, great advice totally refreshing. Thanks for this awesome piece. Cheers.
Thanx so much CLEO!!....... always appreciate your ink on my page girlfriend........... Love and Rockets!!........T xo
Hello Tony...
I am so very happy you clarified this...
I thought it was...
When I pinched myself and...
Pooped!
LOL!
Great write my friend!
Hugs and Smiles!
Feathers
LOL!! ~ FEATHERS!!......... you have a way with words girlfriend!!...........thanx for taking time with this....... and for making me smile!!...........thanx for this!!........... Love and Rockets!!........T xo
Thank you and...
You are very welcome!
Hugs and Smiles!
Love and Rockets!
Feathers
Do I miss this wonderful piece,
no! God this made me cry for my
sins, what a wonderful man you are
and writer!! Luv Jai:)
What an great mixed rhyming poem! I certainly like the meaning behind this powerful piece of poetry. flows very well. great word choice. excellent metaphors. overall, exceptional job!