What She Represents
Had he not, love left
With all his hate
For the time thought wasted
And the constant rush of day,
​To grow in patience upon arrivalÂ
Answering an unison questions from little talking tongues,
That fight over his fleeting attentionÂ
In moments seemingly wavering for nothing or no one.
Stationery, for remainders light
Into flowing dark until night's end,
Now missing for days
Wishing, one can recapture them again,
Go on, calmy pretending to be that duck floating on the pond
An illusive trick, deceptive, unseen
But in mind the struggles of coming to grips
To remain afloat, underwater legs thrash furiously.
It is there in that chair
She gravitates to his embrace,
Lightening seeds by bed, her cushioned bosoms take on weight of head
Being that much needed relief, love remains...a skeptics needed belief.
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terrific stuff, Devon...Image is good as well;  I`m a fan of nipples in general, but it works well for this poem; the write gives off a subtle maternal comforting tone to the reader, enjoyed, my friend...cheers Â
Christopher what's cookn man? I absolutely love this picture too, believe it or not I can't stop staring at it and you don't even see much of her but side face and boob and to me that is darn sexy especially the feeling she is expressing I knew that was the picture. I wanted something to sensuate that man laying his head full of burdens on the one person who can sooth him to continue being the man she loves. Im a big believer in, behinf every good man is a good woman. Love hearing your comments on my page man I appreciate that.
Devon!!...... this is a stunning write in it's flow and movement.........VERY poetic bro!!........ reads like a SHELLEY poem......... and that's not saying enough.........I can tell you put a LOT of thought and effort as you went along...... line to line........ it's an excellent representation of what poetry can be....... when you come back to this in a few months....... with fresh eyes...... and do a re-write.......I think you'll be surprised at its sweet perfection......... just a thought......... Loved this man!!........ peace and hair grease.........T xo
I so appreciate the recognition and all yhe faith you have in me. I think if I'm to revisit this in the future it would be to change the end. I don't know too much about shelley I just reaf a couple and I really like Love's Philosophy, but hey I will definitely take that compliment. Always a pleasure to get that coveted Tony Taylor Feedback. Love Peace and chicken grease.