WHAT IS WAR FOR ?

Horrified screaming, twisting, rolling
Of children, thirsty, hungry inside the tent.
Effort, in vain, of mothers to console
Out, under the hot sun, among the mob, squeeze
To grab a handful to eat.
Innocent orphans expect their dads
Not known, them had been smashed.
From the eyes, the warm drops
Of the widows, deep sigh, within,
While the glad moments memorized.
Thrown out to street
Not a centre to treat,
With almost injuries, least care, forsaken
The stretchy, vast, deserted land them before
The visible sky, above, the only roof.
Insanity, pestilence and the diseases
Too for the posterity.
Miseries, sorrows endless, last over years.
Have them turned to be refugees
But once, well established the families.
Hard work realized the dream homes,
Centuries old cultural heritages,
Museums, bridges, roads, tele-media
A moment's target, trembled,
Kissed all on the ground.
Oh world, disclose yourself,
Who is the winner ? what is the winning ?
Bodies over dead bodies, no a single to bury
Nothing, but the foul smell from the non buried heaps.
Is it the win ? Is it the gain ? Is it the fame ?
Sayed thangal
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So many points are provided here. A great view on the horrors of what has gone on for centuries. Good writing.
Michelle
Thanks very much, for your on time support and encouragements, all the best.
Daily tortured of the war victims made to compose poem,
faithfully, sayed , regards to Michelle
Hello dear Roy, I express my gratitude for your support, as you stated , Wilfred Owen, the war pot, contributed a lot in the field of litt against the war,
with regards, sayed
Wow, you can tell this is a little piece of your soul..Your truly an artist!
Hi Amber, thanks for your valuation, I like the way you expressed the aspect.
with regards, sayed
great poem sayed and very sad but true,no one really wins in war, it just brings more pain and sad memoirs
nothing is really gained but a lot it lost
Thanks Asma for your positive comment
sayed with regards.
a very good poem sayed i have a few on war and like yours give the same message peace is what we should have. blood has been splattered in too many countries .your poem brings that out. who wins? no-one .good write sayed tina x
thank you very much, Tina.I appreciate you for the positive thinking and comment
sayed
this is a deep and moving poem. great capture.
Thanks very much Glenn for your sharing
sayed
really great poem. I have always had a place in my heart for our brave men and women that fight for our country. just really liked this!!!
Thank you Amanda for the interpretation you made here, you are welcome
sayed
Sayed,
This is a real feeling and a real meaning of what? and the what fors? You tell it well, so sad we can't fix things.
Great write
Nancy
Hello Nancy,
Thanks a lot for your positive and creative view on this matter
sayed
beautiful poetry I like it very much
This is great. Well done, well written.
Thanks to you both, Louise and Kenneth for your encouragements.
sayed
Thanks a lot Susan, I'm sure you grasped the poem in detail, again to write new, by your encouragements.
sayed
I'm confused by the your comment, the first one was easy to follow, but he second one is out of my range of understanding on what you intended here, .....
sayed