Poem -
When I First Held The Light
 Love Reigned,
Down from an unnaturally lit roomÂ
ChaosÂ
Replaces thoughts of romanceÂ
Excitement buildsÂ
.........And buildsÂ
Eyes have no use for lidsÂ
Time.....has no revelance at the momentÂ
Only later is it relative, to family historyÂ
Joy overcomes meÂ
A hard figure unableÂ
To fight against the squall of tears,
Honored to be first in calling you by nameÂ
That pureness, cleansing soulÂ
A go to memoryÂ
Memories are lucky for meÂ
I held the light,
Times three.
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Hey Devon  love the picture and your words take this write away into a blissful feeling of joy and happiness.  A great write hugs to you rock.Â
Hey Rock how you been. I may have tugged at the heart strings of all you parents who read this. I hope uou were remebering that time meeting your child for the first time and how you felt, it is powerful. Thanks man much respect in return.
Hey D!!.........there are a couple of lines in there that I believe had a hidden meaning for you.......but I agree with PURPLE.........it does read like this was aimed at the joy you find in the girls in your life.........gorgeous.......I liked the way you used "Reigned" in your opening.........great read........peace bro!..........T xo
Yo big bro, thanks man! It was in no means a hidden theme, It was anout the first time I held my children the feelings I felt which is like holding that light of goodness that lifts you up with that feeling. Very very powerful feelings that takes you over. I know you and everyone who commented is reminded of that time and feeling and that feeling felt warmed your heart. Much love and respect to you good sir. Peace.
Yo Hennis, how was your weekend man? Thank you for the great compliment, my kids are the best thing to happen to me and I don't say that as a cliche they just helped me to see real life and the right way to be. I consider myself a good Dad and a better father than mine. Ill be talking to you soon my friend, peace.