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When I Met You.....

When I Met You.....

The feeling that I had when I met you.

It was like a flowering  blooming for the first time.

It was like feeling brand new again.

It was like feeling your heart beat like it never has before.

It was like seeing the sun again where everything was so dark .

It was like the feeling of waves from the ocean running across your feet.

It was like smiling again for the first time.

It was like seeing the perfect sunset in your dreams.

It was like LOVE and I never want to forget what that felt like when I met you for the first time!!!!!!!!!!!

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Tony Taylor

Hey LOVING HEART!! .....my friend (smiles)....... this is filled with fantastic phrasing......." like... waves from the ocean running across your feet!" ~ great stuff girlfriend..'... enjoyed meeting you sweet poetess!!.......I now feel like I understand your poetry so much better...... you definitely know how to make a reader smile!!....... Lovely write girlfriend!!.......ALL STARS!!....... LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo. ;?

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Loving Heart

Hi Tony,  I just want to say Thank you for your sweet comments.    I so enjoyed meeting you also .   I'm happy that I can put a smile on your face with my simple poems.   I write from my heart !  I hope all is well with you and feeling better everyday .   Hugs & Smiles and Healing ::) Loving Heart .  

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Richard Waters

Such a heart warming uplifting poem ! I find your writing refreshing and stimulating !

Keep up the good work !  :)

A happy Christmas to you and yours.

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Loving Heart

Thank you for your very nice comments !  I'm honored you read my work .    I think your work is just amazing .   

Merry Christmas to you and your Family !!!!!

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