when i met you

it was in the midst of darkness when u came to rescue my sadness never had i thought that u will give me the bed of rose, roses are meant to woman who dearly loves her soul but when u handed it to me i not only see my soul but i see ur soul in me how could a man show his love in a far distance shore if not because of a miracle love to bloom is impossble impossible, to give the love to share in a distance shore, but with miracle in the light there is no impossible to two people in love.
two people from far apart link by the net to chat, tagged by the site to unite two soul forever apart one day they knew they will be together for thier love and they will cross the ocean to touch, thier love forever as it was, and stay together as one heart.
I am not the purest gold but am the rarest gem, when u could have me u are the greatest treasure hunter
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to all my friends..welcome n comment to my post
Nice
thank you very much the comment...
Wuhu...Me love you!!!
Very pretty poem and time,space and distance link together even as one bares no restraints on the true test of time for ones love for another and as you stated, with the assistance of technology, love for another is now and always will be a mere fingers tap away from each other....
With Kind Regards,
Jim
thank you jim for reading my poem..keep in touch
You are quite welcome,
" I am not the purest gold but am the rarest gem, when u could have me u are the greatest treasure hunter." unique lines and quite original...Good job and great writes by the author....
Jim
salam thanks my friend for the good advice
thanks jim its really original..n from my heart
Modern age give all the assistance to close the humanity together irrespective of colour ,politics , religion and language but people see these with blind eyes ,more over the negative sides are being utilized.
Give preference to stanzas and punctuations . A good one , ok.
salam thanks my friend for the good advice