Poem -
When She Comes
Without fail
My heart sinks to my stomach
These feelings still rise
And violently plummet
And without fail
I'm hearing her humming
That beautiful melody
Ever so numbing
Could give her my all
If only my heart would stop banging
These walls
And breaking me down
Nothing is easy
When she comes around
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Comments
Hello CO...
Poor guy!
Sounds like you've been bit by the love bug again?
Great to see you back my friend!
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs and Smiles!
sparrowsong
Hey Sparrow!!! Yeah its that time again lol as much as I try to resist I'm a hopeless romantic. Thank you, glad to see you read and enjoyed this!
Hugs
CO
Hey CO!!...... this has amazing flow to it's melancholy delivery......... it is fine poetry bro!....... when you can make your reader feel something like you've done here........ it's coming from the heart of intent!!......... beautifully delivered ...........had to pin this my friend!!........VERY poetic!!......... Love and Rockets!!.........T xo
Awesome Curious. Like your rhymes man, stomach and plummet. Dude this was a really a great heartfelt write. Digging the difference stuff you are writing. Peace.
Thanks Devon, I just want the people who read to know I'm very versatile and don't only make dark stuff lol. Appreciate the compliment!
Cheers, CO
Adversity brings out the best in us brother or at least broadens our horizons. If I label myself anything it would be versatile. My respect to you fellow poet.
Hi Curious Great write
you describe so well how love
can affect us,
I love your poetry
Best wishes Debs
Thanks Debs! I love to hear that people love my writes! Best wishes to you :)
CO
Just want to shout out thank you to everyone for your continued support and love!! I'm your fan :)
CO
Wow i get this...*******************
Love comments like this, an unspoken mutual understanding. You know the feeling, thanks for checking out my piece
CO
CO, this is terrific man, has a unique sound and tone to it, intelligent transporting poem, enjoy this original understated write, cheers
Thanks Chris understated is a big yes and compliment thanks for reading and relating as well!