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When the Shit First Hit the Fan

I was there man
when they sacrificed the lamb
I was there man
when the shit first hit the fan ..
And I assure you
there was something very good
and likewise special
we somehow kind of lost, I fear
somewhere on the
road to where we are today ..

 

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Marion

I have read this a few times and understand it to be a write about an event that is percieved to be abhorrent or unfair. Forgive me if I'm wrong...thought provoking read Neville x

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Neville

Although a gentleman neva tells .. I thought it only fair to confirm certain aspects of your ever so kind review note M .. Many serious thanks my friend x

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