Poem -
When They Took Away the Tumour
When They Took Away the Tumour
When they took away the tumour
They left us with a scar
Yet my love goes so much further
Than the star I named for her
Some scars go on forever
Whilst others not so far
Yet my love flows so much deeper
Than all the oceans sailed for her
When they took away the tumour
They left us with a scar
Yet my love is so much brighter
Than the brightest super nova to be sure
When they took away the tumour
They left us with a scar
Yet my love for her is stronger
Than the strongest super-steel or super glue
I just wanted you to know that
So I send it in this scribble
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These words are sublime. They say sooo much. The whole of this poem is beautiful tovthe core. What huge oceans we sail in the name of love x
Tis true BM & I truly thank you for noticing .............. N :) x
Well done brother!!...Well done!!....Love the repetition of the title phrase....it creates such a lovely rhythm for the whole.......ALL STARS!!....Well penned NEVILLE!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
Thanks a million mate .. N :)
Got me right in the heart and soul. Felt every word...live these very words every day...blessings and many hugs...x
Bless you too Marion & loadsa hugs back at ya x