Which way to Wonderland ?
Hereβs a challenge for Cosmopoets?
In soundlessness solace from sleep deprivation
I find no follies from dreams duration
My mindlessness maddens feeling frustration
Amidst darkening hours of dreary damnation
Oh how I longed to see slumberlandΒ
where my thoughts got lost in wonderland
and to while away my wondering with dreamy unplanned
Perhaps I needed a potion for a helping hand
So I lie in limbo aggravated
totally disillusioned and exasperated
Just another night going nowhere with nothingness
within a vacuumed void of hollowness
Twisting and turning in insomnia
leaves me yearning for the learning of chimeras
Instead I am lay on my familiar bed
Inwardly irksome betwixt my head
Feeling fraught from sleeplessness
Tinnitus disturbs my peacefulness
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Awesome Jill and a very cool challenge! Ian William has also issued a challenge for "lost soul".Β I'll have fun with these two ?
Awww okay lost soul eh lol β€οΈ?β€οΈ
gonna be a challenge for sure.Β wonderful challenge and a superbly etched verse.
Awww Thanks me lilβ Chickadee Have fun !!! β€οΈ?β€οΈ
great poemΒ
so this about not sleeping
and dreaming so i know
when i write it
p.sΒ i see you have
tinnitus like i doΒ
that will keep you a wakeΒ
Ay BIGTIME at mo lol ???β€οΈ
Ay its my insomnia/ tinnitus lol β€οΈβ€οΈ?but yours can be watever ?β€οΈ?β€οΈ
My ears ring 24 seven louder in the middle of the night But Iβm used to it Iβve had it a long time hearing aids in both ears Try not to let it bother me try to ignore it sometimes but itβs hard
I have tiny ebay cheap as chips speaker plugged into my
phone on plane mode sos battery doesnβt drain
it plays brown noise from free apps or the calm oceanic sounds now sometimes it masks the high pitched rusty old generator and alas at times it doesnβt
I am walking & just did that ditty passing my 5 miles β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
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Fabulous. Loved reading this. You are so good Jill!! ?
Awwww Thank you so much haha I dunno bout that I just try my best at rhyming lol β€οΈ?β€οΈ
Wow! There is music in your poetry.Β
I read the poem aloud to listen to the beats of your rhyme.Β
Favorite stanza:Β
Incredible job with the rhyme scheme and topic.Β
I aspire to write like you one day.Β
Smiling... wow.Β
Awww luv but we are all unique and are blessed with what we possess, you are you and I am me and thatβs the way it is meant to be !!! ?β€οΈ?β€οΈ