Whirlwind

awsome poem 

I like this poem. It has the imagery to conjour up the whirlwind the tempest the gale ..... and give it a slant... creative. Enjoyed
Lara 

There is something a little bit special here my good man .. and that first stanza is outa this worldly .. Verily much enjoyed sir Jim :)

“Evil only seeks to devour!” It’s the never ending bane of humanity. Strong write!
JP

wonderfully written masterpiece

Indeed indeed. 
 

Stunning Jim ...both the photo and the words x

Oh, very sublime and subliminal on offer in equal measure here Jim, very, very clever and a rollercoaster to ride on and works on all levels.
Powerful and extremely creative ink displayed and a darned great read.
No punches pulled and real cut to the chase lines,  the essence of polished and direct writing.
Loved reading this Jim.
And thank you for the poetry rush.

Wonderful write dear Jim The Lad! Careers off the page like a whirling dervish whirl, very powerful and evocative indeed. Hope you are very well. xx