Whispers of an echo

In the quiet depths of twilight’s breath, Where shadows dance with light’s last sigh, I wander lost, where love once thrived, Now buried deep, where echoes lie.Our laughter once rang clear and bright, Now silence wraps where whispers played. In every room, in every night, Your absence leaves a cold cascade.Your touch, a ghost upon my skin, A phantom kiss that haunts my dreams. I reach for you in sleep’s soft spin, But grasping air, my heart still screams.The stars that bore our secret names Now flicker faint in distant skies. Their glow, a memory that fades, A silent tear in moonlit eyes.Where once was love, now sorrow grows, A garden wild with thorn and rue. Each petal falls like silent prose, A testament to all I knew.And though the days move on and on, Their passing mocks this aching void. For in my soul, you’re never gone, Your memory, my heart’s decoy.So here I stand, where dreams decay, Among the ruins of what was. A lover lost, a heart in fray, Eternal grief, because, because.
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hauntingly sad and also beautiful x
Thank you for taking time in reading my poem
Dear poet brother.....I am most impressed by your
ability to deliver PERFECT metering......especially
doing it with great intent......I am going to say this
to you with only the kindest of intentions...
If you "break your lines" into poetically
established guidelines.....NOT rules....I believe
your words would have a great deal more impact!!
Like....
"In the quiet depths of twilights breath
Where shadows dance with lights last sigh
I wander lost, where love once thrived
Now buried deep, where echoes lie...."
This is a famous poetic timing that you're using here,
In fact it was Edgar Allen Poe who was one of the greatest
wielders of this kind of poetic timing that brought it to
the forefront of literature.......
You my friend....are gifted......your immaculate sense
of poetic timing needs to be heard.....unless you wish
to remain anonymous.....I believe you would benefit
by simply acknowledging the fact that you have been
given a gift......perhaps......you should share that gift....
There are MANY who would love to help you in this pursuit....
If I have offended you.....or....spoken out of turn...PLEASE
accept my apologies!!.......
I am Tony Taylor
A long time member of Cosmofunnel
Thank you my dearest poet brother I'm touched by your kind words I'm just truly like minded individual who loves poetry and my inspiration comes easily but I honestly don't see nothing special in my poetry I just express the feeling the visual the heart. Iam truely blessed for your kind words and your time to read my poem thank you