Poem -
Who is She
As treacherous as she may be
great beauty lies within
as she glows all night and day
her danger grows in every way
so be aware and be cautious
the world is half her own fortress
she brings life into our world
but be aware and don't be deceived
by the beauty which you can see
as she will take life as she will please
her danger lurks in every way
she is full of darkness
yet so full of light
she is changing all the time
so what is it that I see
why it's the sea
as you can see
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Really well written. Almost as if you are not just describing the sea but yourself as well.
Thanks I try to let my writing come from the heart
well done, loved your poem, write what you feel that seems to give the best results for me
Thanks writing from the heart is what I try to do I'm working on a new piece at the moment hope you like this one to
Lovely poem :)
An excellent conceit runs through the heart of this poem.
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Welcome to Cosmofunnel.
J ;)
Thanks Jason glad you liked it