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WHO IS THAT MAN?

Who is that man with long straight hair ?
He is strolling about like he seems to care
Telling us all to be kind to one another 
Treat everyone equally like a sister or brother 

Who is that man he has a beard as well
He comes from heaven and has bypassed hell
Telling us all about the virtues of love 
This man has been sent by the Lord above 

This man is not on the earth today 
If he was I wonder what he would say
I'm not religious but if I were I would pray 
Peace and love I would want forever to stay

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Tony Taylor

Hey KIERAN!!......I enjoyed the wordplay here...... the veiled references to Jesus keep it compelling throughout......I like the way you used the A,A, B,B, rhyme scheme as well ~

                         ~ "Telling us all to be kind to one another
                              Treating us all  like a sister or a brother!!"......

Truth and Kindness ALWAYS works!!!.......ALL STARS!!.... enjoyed this!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!..........T xo. 

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