WHY???
Life is alluring ...or
am i just in an illusion?
Why this ecstasy in a bubble,
leaving the sky clouded...?
From saint to beggar
longing to quench the
unsatisfied appetite ...
either to amuse soul or body.
will they ever be able to succeed..?
Why this drought everywhere?
Restless earth spinning with all her strength,
Bright sun burning day and night monotonously,
Moon stealing suns rays and revolving
round earth hastily why o why?
Is there an end to this quest?
When will I be able to find
the answers for unresolved thoughts?
Will I be able to rest my soul in peace?
Wish a peaceful sleep, free
of thoughts and anguish,
in a timeless zone of unknown land,
Will I be able to reach that
hustle free land of dreams???
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Comments
Piusha
" Why this drought everywhere?
Restless earth spinning with all her strength,
Bright sun burning day and night monotonously,
Moon stealing suns rays and revolving
round earth hastily why o why? "
The above lines are excellent. I looks like these lines are from a matured Poetess. I am much delighted to read this verse of yours. Good luck
Regards
Willy
Thnxxx-Cherie for your kind remarks.
Thnxxx-Cherie for your kind and supportive review.
And lines flown out from an a metre poet willy.I m
Learning different styles of write .And I m...glad that you always encourage everyone that's one of your unique quality which I may learning.
Cheers
Piusha Singh,
I really love the below lines My applause, My Vote, Nominated.
" From saint to beggar
longing to quench the
unsatisfied appetite ...
either to amuse soul or body."
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Oh god kill me now..Sorry Willy.
This phone is useless.i m still learning willy.Amd I respect u r kind nature of encouraging people.
That's your unique nature.Which makes u stands out among the crowd.
Anyone knows how to delete or edit a comment.pls??
Piusha,
Sincere congrats on your winning nomination
Regards & Love
WILLY
Thnxxx William for your wishes.
Thnxxx Cherie for your wishes.
Piusha :)
Sorry it took me so long to get a read of this one but your a star my girl!
You have the ability to converse words so eloquently..I love this write and can't wait to see you try new styles of poetry :)xx
Keep on keeping on ! :)
Hi Carey thanks for your honest review.It means a lot to me.This is my way of poetry,but i m trying other styles as well as still i 'm a foetus. in this field.
cheers
Piusha,
Just a glimpse on your earlier postings, Great work
Love, Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI