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WHY

I truly believe
You saw something
Something within me 
That I was too blind to see

I felt as if my life
Was nothing
Nothing but a walking coma
Slowly slipping away 

© 2014 Valerie Lynn

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Tony Taylor

I TOTALLY understand EVERY word of this piece..........lovely, touching, sad, and appreciative..........just succinct gorgeousness!!.....     7*s   FAV       ..........love and rockets!!...........T xx

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Valerie Lynn

Aww thank you Tony for reading and for the 7*s ;)  I have been thinking of you so much lately! I am always here for you! I need to catch up on your writings. You make this world a better place! Love ya!

Val ♥️

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Great write dear Sister Valerie,Lynn,

I wish to take up a study on all your poems,

Regards & Love

Willy

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Valerie Lynn

Thank you BigBro!! I hope you are having a wonderful day today! Happy Birthday!

Love,
YLS Val ♥️

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Christopher Correia

Val your communication skills are superb, such a gift you have with expression; not what you say but how you say it, it's  a priceless gift you possess, I read this poem and so quickly I got where you're coming from that amazes me...today I found myself on the defensive after I said something to a group of friends, all but one of them misunderstood what I meant, and luckily she bailed me out....I'm telling you from this end of your write, you connect with perfect clarity....tone, balance construction, this is brilliant work,

you should write more; I do feel like a bit of a hypocrite in saying that, I don't write much 

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Valerie Lynn

Wow Chris! I am honored by your comment! Thank you!! I know you have been super busy as AOM this month and receiving this comment means so much to me! Thank you for taking the time to write to me. You really did just make my night. I haven't been able to write much lately but was actually about to post something. It's a bit dark and I'm a little self conscience about my writings but I'm going to post anyway. Thank you once again for your honesty and for being so supportive!

Val ♥️

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norman hardwich

hi Valerie this is such a good poem you have a way of bringing out big emotions with few words amazing :-) you are the queen of emotion :-) much love to you Val.xoxo

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Valerie Lynn

Hi Norman!! You always know how to brighten my day! Thank you for such a sincere comment and for taking the time to read my poem!! You're awesome!! Much Love to You!!

Val ♥️

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Valerie Lynn

Haha aw I didn't even notice that until now! I need to catch up on my comments! Everything has been so crazy for me lately...time to get back on here and get to writing! ;)

♥️

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Jai Masters

 Gets you in the heart

Where all poetry belongs 

Dear Valerie, I love this poem. 

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Valerie Lynn

Aww Jai! Thank you for reading and for making me smile :) You just made my night! 

With Love,

Val ♥️

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Valerie Lynn

Thank you Mark!! So happy you like this one!!

With Love,

Val ♥️

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

Dear Poetess Valerie Lynn,

Very meaningful and beautiful short verse

I wish to carry-out the Malayalam translation of your above verse to post in COSMO, seeking your kind permission, please

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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