Why Me
Love Hurts
Why cant you just stop? The tip of the pen its poking me over and over again. One door closes when tears a lude the air. The sun is sucked dry my heart aches. Fells like I am about to break at any moment. Trying to hold on just don't see the strength that many say I have. My heart thrives for so much more. Yet I am consumed with grief this hurt runs deep. Like a butcher knife cutting through my meat the icicles protrudes deep beneath the surface. Screaming only to go unheard this is so absurd. Have you placed my soul on the curb? So cold yet hot it like banging your head in the same spot. Swarmed by the black clouds that's surrounding my the earth. As the green mist fills the air looking in the distance only to find no ones there. Chest so heavy that breathing becomes scary invading my mental space. Trying to sip to take it all away. Not an answer just question after question. What's this lesson I am missing? Is this truly a blessing? So why cant I stop stressing? No hug nor smiles my thoughts are running in a million miles. When the wind blows where will I go? Maybe one day I will know.
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Hi Elizabeth, I really like this poem, I get a sense of stress from it that seems very daunting. So many different examples, like a mind that's racing. I hope things work out for you. You will always have friends in the Cosmos. All the Best. The Fish of the Sea.
Hi Elizabeth ?. Heartbreak is cruel. It is suffering from grief, anger, bewilderment and hurt all at the same time. Its a tough thing to go through... And some don't make it. I hope writing helps you. I am assuming you are writing out your own feelings here because your words are spot on. Spot on and elequent. Hold on in there. Do whatever you need to do but do not give up. The broken path of a love lost is a painful one to walk but after a while the scenery changes and things do get better. They do, I promise you.
Feel proud of yourself because this is a very well written piece x