WILLIAMSJI MAVELI WRITES, NOSTALGIA
NOSTALIGIA
Charming and lovely memories of you still reside,
when it reflects, I cannot keep my thoughts aside,
A sense of the vibe in my life, ahead of a pride,
And a flavor of those nostalgia in me abide.
Of a long time in my life, years transferred,
Taking a wise turn of brilliant days retrieved,
Relieving gift of sweet memories redeemed,
An innocence of adoration, a love blossomed.Â
Remembering sweet words spoken earlier days,
Promises were broken by each in many ways,
Where we both managed to inflame smiles,
Amidst of our long boring days, like snails.
Body vibrates for a long awaited embrace,
We both trance of crossing life bound race,
in a plea to come nearby and just to touch,
A hug to go on board, and my love to vouch.
By
Williamsji Maveli
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Comments
Hello, Williamsji Maveli.
You began your poem featuring a mono-rhyme scheme then deviated from that in the following stanza where nothing rhymed at all.
You finished up with a sort of aabb rhyming scheme while using a great deal of slant, or near rhyme.
Interesting composition.
Keep those creative fires burning...
~Dean Kuch ...?️
Dear honorable Poet Dean Kuch,
After the greetings,
Many thanks and much regards to you. I wish to extend my sincere gratitude for your most valuable guidelines,
Stay blessedÂ
Love & Light
Williamsji MaveliÂ
The pleasure was entirely mine, sir.
You're more than welcome.
~Dean
Hey Mr. M!!......how's everything going...,. haven't read you in a while..... hope the leg is improving.....,. and that your overall health is well........ enjoyed the write this morning!!...... sending lots of love and prayers your way my friend!!........ ALL STARS!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!..,....T xo ??✴❤✴???
Dear honorable Poet Tony Taylor,
After the greetings,Â
Good Morning Sir,
Many thanks, much regards, I have already started walking slowly with the artificial limb made in Germany. Improving, I also, just started writing more and more. Thanks for your valuable prayers and love, Keep in touch, stay blessed,
Love & Hugs
Williamsji Maveli
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Dear Cherie Sumner,
After the greetings,
Good Morning from India,
Many thanks and much love to you. I started compiling my next book of analysis and appreciation of your selected 200 poems, I discussed the project with the publishers on how to make it more attractive. i will be making an artist to draw 10 illustrations to include in the book. If you wish, you may also draw images in black and white based on your poems in general. I wish to include any of your lovely sketches or images drawn by you. May I include your picture as its cover page ?. Seeking your permission and approval.Â
The picture you had send me earlier was good, but the publisher says that it is not in 300 dpi pixels. Glad, if you could take a picture by the studio artist to make it as cover page with you name and my name on it, or else, you are free to send any art pictures ( Preferably illustrations from your brush ) . Take your own time, Any suggestions from you are most welcome, you may forward the pictures, illustrations and suggestions to my email williamsji@yahoo.com
Stay blessedÂ
Love & Hugs
Willy
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