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Window pain

Omg you've had me,
For the last couple of weeks,Β 
In complete awe!Β 
I'm so happy ive found
The real you I fell in love with and adore.
That smile and those eyes ingrained in my mind,
I'm Not gonna be fully happy till I'm back in Colchester,
Only you will I want to find.
My mind blanks without you by my side,
I love life with you and your craziness which now you no longer hide.
Time without you truly is horrible,
Without you my heart is in tatters and torn inside.
Can't wait till I see you again,
Only 1 night and already I feel myself going insane,
I'll be like a dog waiting at the window for its owner,
They Call it window pain!

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Tony Taylor

Hey JAMES!!.....I could feel the longing in some of the phrasing here...... and those phrases do create some VERY powerful imagery!!...... all of which come to a fine crescendo in your closing lines ~

Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β  ~ "I'll be like a dog waiting at the window for its owner,
Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β  They call it window pain"

Clever stuff my friend!!...... smiles.......ALL STARS!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo ?✴❀

Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β Β 

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