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WINTER

Exhale
Freely
See the winter own
Your breath
Watch her weave it to
One last white flake
From the beauty
That you left

M P 13/12/21

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Shaun Cronick

Marion when it comes to poetry of style and substance I believe you knock it out the proverbial poetry park.
Superbly written and clearly demonstrating less is more.
Wishing you well and be seeing and reading you sooner rather than soon. x.

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Marion

Bless you Shaun...thankyou ๐Ÿ’•

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Jim "The Lad" ....

"cool" write Marion!.................................................................Jim

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Marion

Thanks Jim...appreciated x

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Being Me

This is just brilliant. Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant. Love it. It is so strong. I was going to highlight a line, but I couldn't you have done such an amazing job of saying it all in so few words x

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Marion

Aw thanks love ...hope all is well ๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•

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sharaine freese

Marion,
You have a true gift for writing and it shows in all your work. I like the
imagery you can conjure up.. THat to me is poetry in a nutshell. In a
ย format that is not a huge story.. a poem can quickly set the mood, the message and the reader is there with you.ย  Nice Write.
Sharaine

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Marion

Aw thankyou love that is a lovely comment though I'm ashamed to say I have a few 'ramblers' under my belt also lol...hugs x

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