within her eye's .

Good write, thanks for sharing, My applause, My love, my vote

Let go of all the heartache
Replant love in here
Nothing is what it seems
If not to chase those dreams
Give his love a chance
for what his love does mean

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Hey Lil Sis,

The ability to let go, of a once, true first love, is never as easy, as we felt it to be, when we experience it ourself, rather than presenting as," the outsider looking in," on anothers faultering are slipping away, relationship.... Making the judgement  for ourselves, isn;t quite  that easy to decide upon...A strong poem, of life changing choices, for any to have to face, although it may feel for the worse, in the long run, hind site, will prove it to have been, the best choice chosen, even for a stronger and compassionate hearted Poetess such as yourself, (Lil Sis)....Always a pleasure, to read one of the many, pleasureable works, of my Lil Sis and remarkable Poetess, always at work, (Ms. Nardine sanders.)...Words and lines of interest, which heavenly transcinded, even  the powers, of the entire poem..Loved it all...You have an extremly compassionte and pure heart, my dear friend and Lil Sis, never allow it to be dilluted by any ...... Jim

An angel came to visit me
crystal tears within her eye's
She seemed to whisper a question
Within a hidden disguise
Asking me so, why?
Why can't you let him go?
Her tears were crystal balls
Dwelling as they fell
She already knew
my heart was under his spell
She whispered again
within my ear
Give your heart a chance
my dear..

Dear Brother Sir Jim Arnold Sir,

I am much delighted to read your rare comments and presence here at COSMOFUNNEL, How are you Sir Jim Arnold ?, Hope all are fine at your side, Give my regards to your family, My second daughter, Madonna Williams, Her wedding took place on 25th October as earlier announced in COSMO, I request for your blessings and love for the newly wedded couple,

Hope you will remain for sometime  with us, Pick any of the good poems and shower us with your excellent reviews and comments

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

( Your Brother )