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Without Alterations

Without Alterations

Hello....hello,
All you outcasts,
you strangers,freaks, unknowns,
creatures?
Don't let me
be off putting
I'm just low-key
not a trickster
I want you to see.....
I want you to see.....
What life looks like
Without alterations
alterations done upon thee,
by your hand or mans hands
This isn't a dream.
What's normal,
but another
word in your vocabulary,
And when I look from inside
your head I see your stand-
out point, it's far too long to have been bled, stained skin,
and artificially force fed; take a look?
I want you to see.....
I want you to see.....
In your rarest form of purity,
I want you to see....
That appearance
doesn't control reality,
Not everything
you think, feel, and see...
Has anything to do with me,
sure......this insight
into what your life is like
Is truly unusual,
For what I've shown you
That, in which has really made
you....an individual.

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Devon La Porte

Hey C, and I know it's sad but everyones mentality is different....I thought this was a great idea on how I could take another angle in sharing to everyone my wandering thoughts on individuality. I agree though because I would tell my children the same thing, they are perfect the way you are. Thank you for reading and commenting, my love and peace to you and yours.

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Bradford

Good Devon how's life ? A different write for you but it is very dramatic and sad too . I cannot help but rhyme because I'm a poet dude and so are you ! Being goofy which is me ! Most people get caught up in fades and you should be in life to try to be hip or cool. I tried for the most part to stay true to myself. Very cool reality in this one everyone should relate too it . Take care mr d , rock 

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Devon La Porte

Yo Hard Rock, what's up man! Im well hope the same for you too. Thanks for checking this out, and im glad you think this is a different write because that is where I wanted to go with this. I did not want to get to caught up in pointing fingers at outer appearance when so many people judge on what they see and think they know so much by how little they actually do.....its who we are in the mind that should be that reflects. How about that, whatever our minds perceive of oneself shows.....interesting. peace to you bro.

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