Poem -
Without You
You are my world In a bottle That has washed up On the beach. You are my moon When the sun is gone And the sky Seems dark. Without you I am just a mermaid On the shore Calling for the sea. Without you I am a night sky Robbed of its stars. I love you And without you I am nothing.
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Wow Brianna!!...first ~ perfect pic!!.......second ~ whoever you wrote this for is one lucky son of a gun!!..........because.........this is such gorgeous poetry..........It is NOT easy to write a "Love Poem" and make it stand out amid the sea of love poems in existence.......but ~ "Without you I am a night sky robbed of it's stars.." is something I haven't read before........not that I've read everything..........but that REALLY jumped at me..........well done my friend..........Love and Rockets!!..........T xo
Thank you! I appreciate your supportive comment! And the line is amazing, if I must say myself. I came up with that about two years ago and completely forgot about it. I might use it in another poem. Thanks again, friend. ~BriXO
Honorable Poetess Brianna Michel,
Highly romantic, I love it, thanks for sharing, my applause, my vote, I love the below lines
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
I'm loving the feedback, guys! Thank you for your comment and vote. I'll be sure to check out more of your poems! ~BriXO
Hi Poetess Brianna,
I seek your kind permission to translate your poems to my native language, Malayalam, Thanks for your reply
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Yes of course! But first what exactly are you planning to do with it? As long as people know its mine, go ahead!
Honorable Poetess Brianna,
Copyright rules will be followed without fail for the original and translated versions,
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI