Poem - 14 December 2013, 19:42 Contest Nominees Woman of Mine Rashaad Haneef Like fine jazz floating in the air, her love holds me there Hint of Champagne on the lips, Shared pain on finger tips No space between our hips, Love is never lonely in our script Like 0 Pin it 5 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 1537 Rating: Total votes: 10 Tags: Love Magic Rose Poetry Genre: Romance Epic Freestyle Lyric Listed in: Contest Entries 14 comments
Valerie Beasley...14 December 2013, 23:05 Hi…you must be new to the site. Post your poetry, comment on other poets pieces and gather others that will follow you and follow those poets and artist that you enjoy. Develop your craft. There are many talented people on this site. val Reply
Stephen Weyant14 December 2013, 22:05 shaadi, a great write indeed very smooth! thanks for sharing Reply
Tina Moore15 December 2013, 06:31 very romantic piece rashaad!! this proves a short write can make just as good a vision as a long one . beautiful!! tina x Reply
Serious Black15 December 2013, 07:07 I really felt in tune with this one & my wife loves it. Keep up the great work!! Reply
Jimmy Arnold18 December 2013, 14:42 Rashaad, Short, Simple,Sweet but full of bang for any buck meanings attached. Job well done and really enjoyed the read.... Cheers, Jim Reply
Iris Brown20 December 2013, 05:36 Rashaad, This is a beautifully written piece. The simplicity of this poem takes it's reader to an easily imagined place. JOB WELL DONE! Reply
Random Enigma22 December 2013, 09:30 This is a beautiful poem! I'm glad I got to read it! Thank you for sharing it! Reply
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Very nice…this piece has a smooth flow.
val
Thank You Sister, any pointers on how to get more votes?
Hi…you must be new to the site. Post your poetry, comment on other poets pieces and gather others that will follow you and follow those poets and artist that you enjoy. Develop your craft. There are many talented people on this site.
val
shaadi, a great write
indeed very smooth!
thanks for sharing
lovely
very romantic piece rashaad!! this proves a short write can make just as good a vision as a long one . beautiful!! tina x
I really felt in tune with this one & my wife loves it. Keep up the great work!!
Nice write Rashaad, I agree, a nice flow to this piece :)
very nice Rashaad x
Go vote for my love Friends!
THANK YOU ALL, I HOPE U ALL HAVE A BLESSED HOLIDAY
Rashaad,
Short, Simple,Sweet but full of bang for any buck meanings attached. Job well done and really enjoyed the read....
Cheers,
Jim
Rashaad,
This is a beautifully written piece. The simplicity of this poem takes it's reader to an easily imagined place. JOB WELL DONE!
This is a beautiful poem! I'm glad I got to read it! Thank you for sharing it!