" THE WONDERMENT "

FromĀ the house amid the trees
There comes a great choir's dirge
A wraith goes by, to where, no one knows
For theĀ moment has come and gone
Without a spoken word
Death has knocked
And a child is left, fatherless
So the mother takes her by the hand
And slowly walks her
Into the wonderment....
A single star up in the sky
Seems to speak to her
She is not familiar with the Wonderment
But she feels, with great compassion
The loomingĀ loss of her father
And then
The Wonderment comes to her....
It urges her to put on her mourning dress
She walks along a forsaken trail
And finds that she is lost
When suddenly she see's the light
This Wonderment
Is what we think we can ALL become
The good in you, the good in me
The recognition
Of purity....
So in her mourning dress
She steps into the light
And on her knees
She takes a sip of Divinity
In the form of wine
For her, the time has come
And all the girls in the choir
Kneel down to sing along
For they have found their way back home
And without them even knowing
That theyĀ have tasted
And perpetuated
The Wonderment
Through song...
Tony TaylorĀ Ā (Chicago)
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Thanx for the stars you guys!!..........why no comments?.........hmmmmmm!?!............T xo
wow T, how good is this....reads like...hints of a 'holiday season' story (I can't say the word 'Christmas' yet) very edifyingĀ write with anĀ infectiously positive tone, it's visual and musical at the same time; not sure if I've seen that in a poem....great message man, it told me toĀ openĀ up theĀ soul to the healing power of joy and magicĀ ...Ā thank you for putting a charge in my Friday evening bro. Ā beautiful energy comes from this write....have a great eveningĀ Ā Ā
'The Wonderment
Through song...'
Thanx Chris ma Bruva!!.........pretty interesting that you found a holiday spirit in this piece.........because my intent was in the magic (which you mentioned)............but I guess that's one of the coolest things about poetry.........interpretation.........I agree with you about the music..........I was listening to Elvis Costello when I wrote this.........he always takes me UP!!............thanx for this C!!............later...........T xo
T this is a powerful write, at first I percieve that the wonderment is a driving force to living but towards the end with her sipping divinity(awesome line by the way) that the wonderment is or like God and energy all around us beautiful poem and even if I'm way off that's what I thought you can tell me different but I enjoyed reading all the same.
No!! You got it Devon!!..........it's always interesting to hear your comments because you can tell that you've put some thought into what you've read..........Yes, my intention was with that most amazing & unpredictable variable in life ~ ENERGY..........you just have to trust in the magic of life sometimes...........thanx for this D!!............Love and Rockets!!.........T xo
WOW... I am humbled. This is fantasticāŗ I wish I had this talent. Great writing.Ā
Hi Brother Poet Tony Taylor,
Highly mythical verse, my applause, my vote
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI