Poem -
Wounded Warrior
What happened
in the jungles of your life
that killed your soul,
leaving you un-whole?
Staring at the stars,
I know pieces of you
are in the billions of lights
I can never see,
but that Iโve been told
are out there.
I would hold you for a lifetime,
if I could dare to dream
of holding that many stars
against my breast
forever.
ยฉ 2011 C. Harter Amos
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beautiful write.
Thanks for the read and the comment! -Mimi.
Hey C. Harter Amos!!...... the first 4 lines of this piece are "pure magic"....... taking your reader instantly into the realm of "munching's possible".......... an amazing piece of poetry here.......ALL STARS!!........ gorgeous use poetic ingenuity!!......ALL STARS....:.PINNED forever!!....... wow!.......T xo.ย ย ?
Hey that wasย supposed to be "anything's possible"........ sorryย ย ?
I admire your poetry so am flattered by your comment, Tony! Thank you for the read. -Mimi. xx
Hi ย C Harter Amos A sad ย but beautiful write.
ย Aย soulย broken in pieces torn and scatteredย
with a compassionate heart who would like to put back the pieces
A great writeย
Best wishes Debs x
Debs, Thank you forย reading and commenting. ย It's much appreciated! -Mimi.
If I could dare to dream of holding that many stars against my breast forever.......that line sealed it for me! Excellent write......passionate yet smart......all in one.....great combination! Thanks for sharingย .......ย ย ย ย Paula
Thank you for reading and commenting. It's much appreciated. -Mimi.
A magnificent piece!!
best wishesย
Jai:)
Jai, thanks for stopping by to read and comment. I appreciate it. - Mimi.