WTF ???

By Christ las you can write a bloody excellent poem bloody sad tho!!! ❤️❤️❤️

Marion, Marion, Marion! The way you have written this means the poem has a lot of movement in it. This poem paces up and down, and it throws its arms up into the air. The words flow loud and clear and they flow with anger and with tears and with disbelief and with everything that is grief. This poem is brilliant your pen clearly shows us what a brilliant poet you truly are. The ink is alive in this. You have really written into rhythm using pace and meter to great effect so that your scorching words actually scream and actually move. Very clever, very effective and very, very awesome work. 

On another note I just want to say how unfair and horrible this 'thing'  is. I send uou virtual hugs and  tea and cake. Bless you. Thankyou so much for sharing your work with us 💕☕🍰 xx

Marion, this for me just took me back to moments after my dad died. I would be so angry at him. Your cleverly penned lines really rage out that frustration we can feel with grief. I wanted answers and couldn’t get them. I felt betrayed by him. It all felt unfair and I felt cheated out of time with him. But I was only 25 when he chose to end it. I didn’t feel I was enough to stop him. I really felt your pain here.  I wish you didn’t feel this pain lovely friend, I am thinking of you and sending those hugs, which I know bring no comfort...but still I send them 💗
 

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