Poem -
Yield Sign
Awake and arise with spiritual eyes!
Open, they see endless in all directions!
Discernment, they detect all matter that complies,
Gathering light from all; distant perfections.
Focus your thoughts, on the lensing galaxy!
To retrieve all matter that has flown away.
Sifting extinct planets, all riches ere free!
Pulling the black pearl that spins on display!
Push out thick darkness of the hollow void!
Post the yield sign of destruction and death!
Draw comets, or they'll be more than annoyed!
The outer darkness will inhale their breath!
Leaving a hollow shell floating in space,
Once; vibrant messenger; now without trace!
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Comments
Stunning Jimโฆwow oh wow you took me on a journey here and tore through the universe as we went. Glorious and thrilling. Highlighting the depths of existence and the universal current ever flowing through time and space. You just brightened up my day ๐ย
your ever admiring friendย
Gwen xย
I'm so happy I brightened your day Gwen! that my words can create emotion is an exiting triumph! that gives me hope of purpose in my efforts!............Jim
Never stop being true to yourself Jim, that is when you will shine your brightestโฆkeep writing and I will keep reading xย
awsome poem Jim
you getting inย
to deep stuffย
its meaningย
is very deep
always loved the deep end of the pool Greg, you can dive right in! thank you for your support!
thank you Neville!
Excellent write as always Jim x
thank you so much Marion!
Wonderful trip Jimโฆ.ย
glad you liked it JP! wonderful comment!
FANTASTIC Sonnet JIM!!......the effort you put into this is on full display....with great attention being paid to the craftsmanship......with elegant phrasing and well placed rhythmicย timing so as to allow the reader a beautiful voice when this is read aloud....one of my fav's ~
ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ~ "Pulling the black pearl that spins on display..."
A LOT of creative phrasing running throughout this wonderful write... an absolute pleasure to read words that come so trippingly off of the tongue!!.....ALL STARS!! & PINNED!!......thanx for the ride Sir Asimov!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xoย : )
hey Tony! great to hear from you my friend! wow ! I'll take fantastic!ย focused on listening to all suggestions and I may be starting to improve. will implement my latest understanding of poetry in upcoming poems. thanks bunches!
amazing Jim you take me to other places with your imagery and cadence. Well done
honored POETESSDARKLY!
If only. Society allowed.ย
The true and the merciful could be proud, not stuck in the cloud.ย
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thank you Liliana! society is ill, but there is a cure!
ย A stellar sonnet on offer here Jim and glad to journey with you to places and worlds filled with the fantastic.
For at journey's end it is all about experiencing and seeing with spiritual eyes.
And beholding what has gone before and what perhaps awaits.
Another deep and thought provoking write and thank you my friend for said journey.
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my pleasure Shaun my friend! road trips are almost always an adventure, and I love going with friends!
Really amazing writing. I really love it.ย
Love,ย
Rodeo
much thanks Rodeo! all the best to you!
thank you bunches Dominic!
thank you Ashley!