Poem -
YOU ARE MINE
It seems funny ,some times I laugh
When you run after me.
"Thou art a new comer?"
Mocking the mother.
Where are your fore fathers ?
Of course , they are here under me.
Tomorrow you , won't you?
Remember you are mine !
By me you are created
Sustain through only me
Forget not your return to me,
Oh , beware you are mine !
Hope, desperation , happiness , sadness
Achievements , great loss, some times both.
Joyful shouting may be tragic utterancesÂ
All these are you , still you are mine !
Sayed thangal
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Dear friends,
It's symbolic and share your views mainly on 'the speaker' of the poem. regards
the poem to me has a very strong feeling, even the name "you are mine"
it not going in circle and get straight to the point i like that
Dear Asmaa,
As you stated it is not in a circle, but we are in the circle. we are the product of the soil, the mother. thanks
congrats on being a nominee
Deep powerful..Kudos to you! Congrats on being nominated it is worthy of winning! :)
Dear friends,Â
thank you for your sharing, this poem depicts the mortality of human beings, and warns us that we are nothing except a handful of dust. Â still we are greedy and envious ...
Dear Williamsji,
Thank you for the strong support in this venture, and highlighting the inner theme ie the importance of being one , because we are the one as a whole.