Poem -
you don't say it but I know you think it and you show it by saying nothing so I will say it for you in the way you want to say it to me
I don't like your poems
they are garbage
they don't even rhyme
there is no form
in fact
they are not poems
it is not poetry
just rambling shit
actually
I don't like anything you write
or do or say or anything
you are crap
totally
a nothing
a piece of shit
a big fat zero
you scruffy bastard
you ugly fuck
you waste of space
you bore me
I wish you had never existed
if only you had never been born
had never been conceived
you are irrelevant
unwanted
I feel nothing for you
except hate
I hate you
I would like it if you were dead
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Hi Stefan, I too prefer poems that rhyme but this is a bit harsh isn't it? I Obviously don't know who you're on about anyway (and all mine rhyme lol) - SydÂ
hi Syd,
I am on about me. It is written from another persons viewpoint.
Oh right, that makes sense now. It looked as if you were having a go at people who wrote poems that didnât rhyme while at the same time ignoring yours lolÂ
Well yeah, that as well.
Hello Stefan...
It could go both ways...
What type of Audience are you seeking?
Are you wanting Fame?
Some people want Poems that Rhyme...
Some Christians do believe in God and His Kingdom and the Building up and knowing words can Destroy and Tear Down...
Some people find Cursing and swear words, Sexual content and all that stuff funny or amusing...
While some don't...
Are you seeking individual attention or are you keeping God and Families in mind?
You will get the Audience in which are seeked...
Swear words have become a part of Poetry and Comedians throw it in hoping it will help their comedy to be funnier...
But, even some Comedians have removed their curse words and the laughter they receive they're finding more genuine...
Research it, but also asking ourselves important questions...
It takes time in everything to see what works and what doesn't and the Audience you're trying to appeal too...
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
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for fuck sake, it requires nothing. It asks nothing. I ask nothing. You like it, get it, understand it or you don't. If you don't like it, don't get it, don't understand it then just leave it, ignore it, don't comment. I am not interested in analysing the fucking thing to death. That is what two of the three I have put out today are about. Thankyou.
Have a great day too!
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Hugs...
sparrowsong