Poem -
Your Love
First the angels made a garden,
And they called it paradise.
Warmed it with the passion,
From a pair of lovers eyes.
Then they shaped the oceans,
And the sun to shine by day.
Stars to guide the wanderer's feet,
Upon their homeward way.
Then gathered sun and moonbeams,
And the beautiful opal was born.
Ice and fire living in harmony,
Their wise message never forlorn.
Then crafted a tender rose,
The flower of constancy.
Placed a lily by its side,
To teach us purity.
Then to make my life complete,
For all the rest may fade.
Heaven sent me your love,
And that's how the earth was made.
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put this one with some others here, I'll add "Our Anniversary" and we have our own greeting card company! lol! great write Shaun!................................Jim
Just BEAUTIFUL Shaun. That last stanza puts warm fuzzy goosebumps on the reader. There is so much love oozing from your wonderful writing x
Perfect beautiful poetry Shaun...,⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐🤗
Wow, Shaun, an awesome and unique take on the story of creation. Flowing and elegant rhyme flows through this work, soothing and melodic, but I especially enjoyed,
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Such simplicity and effortlessness in creating a deep and relaxing picture for the audience. SUPER well written Shuan. Pinned my friend.
Wow just a beautiful piece of your take of the creation on life. It's so cute, warm and loving. Amazing write. I'm so glad I got to catch up on your poems!! Reading them one after another just shows your range and wonderful writing skills!! Pxxx